Feedback from crit

• The poems are hard to read - they need to be made bigger.
• The stickers look low quality - threshold and bitmap more.
• Poster & concertina work best.
• Introduction doesn't fit in the design.
• Try screen printing the poster and concertina.
• Final product could be three posters with 2 poems on each, printed onto sticker paper and cut out so that the viewer can take them and stick the around.
• Concertina could go with it.
• Can you screen print onto sticker paper after the shapes for the poems have been cut?
• Improve the design of the concertina by putting the introduction onto the blurb instead of the poem for more space - an extra poem.